'It was love when we first got together'
You say as if I believe your lie.
But, I of course know better.
I believed it long ago, before the 'love' rushed by.
But, I have often wondered was it all just a game?
Something that everyone could see but me?
Now I wonder if I will ever be the same,
After expirencing all that you forced me to see.
I was so in love with you
But I guess you never felt that way
Despite all of the romantic things you'd do
I could not keep you from going astray.
You convinced me that you were in love
Now I see it was all just manipulation
Who knows maybe we were once above
But that must have been before your fall into temptaion.
This poem develops nicely, saving it's best line for the end... well done, Amber! Brian
A great poem about possibly a misinterpeted lover's love or a jilted lover hurt real bad in a relationship. Very good. I gave it a ten. God bless all poets-MJG.
Great poem Amber. It's soild and 'before the love rushed by' is a wonderful line. Your work is just too good ~Amber~
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
its well written and it flows smoothly i love it, i think we all have been there before