Amber Green

Wanted Lies

Lie to me,
Tell me that you'll be here.

Lie to me,
Tell me that there's no need to fear.

Lie to me,
Convince me that you can care.

Lie to me,
Convince me that you'll be fair.

Make me believe that you can love me,
Even though, I know this will never be.

Please, just lie to me.

Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 27, 2006
Poem Edited: Thursday, August 19, 2010

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Comments about Wanted Lies by Amber Green

  • Autumn Keele (12/29/2007 1:33:00 PM)

    Why base your relationship on a lie?
    It will never work no matter how hard you try.
    Because you'll always know it, in the back of your mind,
    that It will all be over... Its just a matter of time.

    Why do this when you can do much better,
    you will find someone one, maby you have already met her.
    But that Is beside the fact,
    that a realationship should be based on true love and that is what you lack.

    So let her sit there and Lie to you,
    and keep on living the life you do.
    But just know that one day it will all work out,
    and you'll find out what 'TRUE LOVE' is all about.

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  • Brian DornBrian Dorn (10/7/2006 12:10:00 AM)

    Putting a positive spin on something perceived as negative... interesting concept, you pulled it off well, Amber! !
    Brian

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  • Carol Ngendo (8/4/2006 8:26:00 AM)

    oh so true. very nice.
    Cheers Carol

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  • Gabriella Franco (7/30/2006 8:49:00 PM)

    i have a poem very similar to this one but longer. You got right to it though. great write, darling. keep it up :)

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  • Abigail Keller (7/27/2006 1:51:00 PM)

    Great write!
    I know what you mean!
    ~Amber~

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