Sin And Stuff Poem by Michael Shepherd

Sin And Stuff

Rating: 3.5


Lord – if that is how
a stranger, I, should address
that stranger, you –

I – or one resembling I –
have done so many actions
which the world would classify
as crimes, or sins, according as
the one who classified them might believe…

and in the classifications which
men attribute boldly to that presumed you,
there must be crimes or sins which are unnamed
which I have done; good left undone…

indeed, your devotees would see it as a sin
if any single breath, any heartbeat passed
without their holding you in mind…

So if I understood forgiveness, as beyond
the way we scold our children, even punish them,
yet never cease to love…

then I would ask forgiveness of my sins
in that same spirit; yet I would ask, first,
understanding; mine, and yours
(though I would hope them finally the same)

for I believe that really, the you
that I perceive you as –
that really, you’re my best friend…
who understands my crimes and sins
better than I do myself…

and in that understanding, love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A debt you repaid with plenty of interest I would say sweetheart. t x

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Michael Shepherd 30 June 2007

This poem is a debt of honour - after a mere 72 years - to my six-year-old self, who was quite clear about this relationship, and had frequent friendly words with that best friend about it; but who allowed himself to be persuaded in later years, that it was a far more complicated picture...

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This is infinitely more appropriate (and of course poetic) than 'The Lord's Prayer' which frankly has always struck me as pretty selfish.. I mean, it's a bit rude to ask for your daily bread before you go on to the humility and forgivenes bit, right? And of course it seeks no understanding of what constitutes a sin as you do in this philosophical, engaging work of art. Hell (oops wrong word) the more I think about it the more taken I am by it. t x

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