! ! ! ! ! Sitting Under A Weeping Willow! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! Sitting Under A Weeping Willow! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Sitting under a weeping willow,
At twilight, on a bench in the park,
My friend always cheerful, said
‘I feel so tense and distraught,

The stale air in the house
Makes me feel like going away.
I feel I live with a stranger,
And look back wistfully on the day

We took our vows to stand by
Each other in joy and grief.
Now he just hits the sack
And we just exchange a brief

Nod. I wonder if grandma was better
Off, education hasn’t changed
Our status from weaker sex
Am at odds, as I feel alienated.

Wish could go some place,
I feel I can be happier alone.’
‘Know what you mean, the rat race
Sounded the death toll

Of marital bliss, we all need
Love, joy and companionship.
I feel men too are not having it easy
With performance record as a whip.

At times in growing up
We grow away, like a river
Changing course. Time only will tell
It’s getting cold, I see you shiver.’

Come home, we girls
at least share a unique bond.
it works like a therapy
and eases the mind a lot.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 20 April 2009

There is an old joke and I narrate it with no offence meant! A person went to a library looking for a book titled -'The Bliss of Married Life'! He was not able to find the book because he was looking for it in the wrong section! The Librarian guided him to the section marked 'Fiction'; and he got his book! A happy married life despite the passing clouds, acts like a therepy for the entire family without any doubt! 10 ++++ -Raj Nandy

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Catrina Heart 20 April 2009

astonishing poetic narration.....interesting creation about life....10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 20 April 2009

Well you do get that feeling that not all is well with you, Mamta change is never easy and must be fought for the only ones that can change things are you, stand up for what you want... Andrew 10

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