! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Monsoon At Peak! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

Mamtaji, Monsoon at peak, Open your pen and write the rhythm of drops.

Nice poem ends with a subtle twist. very good.

A lovely poem! This is how true monsoon should always be! But this year due El Nino effect and heating of the waters over the Pacific, and lack of proper moisture feed, our Monsoon is playing hide & seek! 10! -Raj Nandy

Beautiful poem, Mamta. All stanzas seem to be drizzling in my memories. Monsoon is a bit late here in our area. For us this poem is a prologue to Monsoon. Regards Naseer

Bitter sweet songs of Monsoon. Varied perceptions. CP

Very good lines. Expressed beautiful thoughts. Good poem.

A wonderful read bringing the earthy smell right to my laptop. I loved the vignettes of the monsoons that you paint with such a keen sense of observation.

this must be the best poem i have read about the rains. i read it out to my family and we all smiled at the end............thanks for sharing

Mamta, I love this poem it brought such a smile to my face, with memories of the east, so vivid was it, I felt quite damp. Warm regards Bob 10++

monsoon at peak, brings unknown joy to get wet! lovely poem about wet slushy, mud, curling round your toes! beautiful poem mamta, about different aspects of monsoon.real good write.