# A Captivated Audience... Poem by Mamta Agarwal

wow...beautiful, beautiful...its a very strong and marvellous write ma'am, very smooth and the words which can be felt, the whole poem is great but i loved these lines most...... 'From east the Sun’s rays Have come down to play, The game of hide and seek…' bravo, bravo...a humble 10+++ for this marvellos piece... rgds asif

A very beautiful poem ingrained with elegance of natural scenic that really is worth reading in the form of good imageries and metaphors..........There comes a state on our mind in life when we observe things and conclude different things for better enhancements and steps............especially the first stanza really depicts your deep complete imagination about the natural scenics that seems to lie in your soul too...........absolute 10 Best Regards Sameer

This journey from Glacier to Vantage Point Brought tears of fulfillment into my eyes A perfect picture in a wall hangging Dear poet, we are with you to shed tears. A deep look into Nature's eyes Sure to bring tears from within. A serene experience shared with all of us. Enjoyed to the brim. Thank you.

beautiful imagery I see Eden at play- nice work Mamta ++++++10 anjali

lovely..you got along with the nature...read my poem 'the user'....similar

Tears expresses the state of mind. Beautiful expression of feelings.

again, the last stanza has remainded me a play which written based on guruji tagore's a short story, where the main charecter young nature lover tenderly touch flowers and their leaves and become tearful! ! You great indeed Mamtaji!

10000000+ 'From the deep crevice In the mountain, it descends Like a torrent… The language it speaks Can not be matched By any human speech…' very pellucid picto........a deep look at the facts....... ammmmazing wording that imprinted.... really great! !

Ecstacy! ! ! ! ! ! Tears of happiness! ! ! ! That was the great bliss you felt of Nature.......Vivid portrayal with apt and rather stunning end.

Great write! Such an adorable piece!