Sky Poem by Shresth Suraiya

Sky

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oh....high up in the sky,
the people are born there,
gods living up there in the sky,
so amazing if I could stay with the gods up there,
and everything would be so simple

Sunday, November 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 01 November 2015

High up in the sky is simple but glorious definitely. Interesting and wise theme shared here with nice interest...10

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 June 2017

A sublime start indeed. Thanks.

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Manonton Dalan 12 November 2015

maybe you're a dreamer..keep on dreaming...nice

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Kelly Kurt 01 November 2015

A fantasy I have often had as well. Thanks, Shlok

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Rajnish Manga 01 November 2015

I am pleased to welcome you on this Forum with your maiden poem. We hope many more would be forthcoming. Thank you, Shlok Suraiya.

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Rajnish Manga 01 November 2015

Wonderful imagery, living with gods in the seventh sky where life is supposed to be as simple and peaceful as it could be, devoid of any strife and pain.

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