Shresth Suraiya

Rookie - 92 Points (02/08/08 / udaipur)

Sky - Poem by Shresth Suraiya

oh....high up in the sky,
the people are born there,
gods living up there in the sky,
so amazing if I could stay with the gods up there,
and everything would be so simple

Topic(s) of this poem: sky

Form: Prose Poem

Comments about Sky by Shresth Suraiya

  • Jazib Kamalvi (6/22/2017 5:57:00 AM)

    A sublime start indeed. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/12/2015 1:11:00 AM)

    maybe you're a dreamer..keep on dreaming...nice (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/1/2015 11:52:00 AM)

    A fantasy I have often had as well. Thanks, Shlok (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/1/2015 10:40:00 AM)

    I am pleased to welcome you on this Forum with your maiden poem. We hope many more would be forthcoming. Thank you, Shlok Suraiya. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/1/2015 10:36:00 AM)

    Wonderful imagery, living with gods in the seventh sky where life is supposed to be as simple and peaceful as it could be, devoid of any strife and pain. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/1/2015 10:15:00 AM)

    High up in the sky is simple but glorious definitely. Interesting and wise theme shared here with nice interest...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 1, 2015

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