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Dave...ahhhh yes..Karma...Get it right...or come back as a dog...or toad...or mosquito...maybe. Lovely poem...I think you figured out the meaning of life Dave! Hugs, Dee

A grand write Dave!

what time were you up there? ...i was there too! ! ! ...i looked around but didnt see you! ! ....oh ho! ! ! ...the Himalayas blocked my view! ! ! ...lol...love...nalini...beautiful poem, Dave

Dave, don't remove your head from the clouds.. you write so finely from up there! Philosophical indeed... t x

Hey, this is deep and philosophical, Dave. So you have your head up in the clouds? I think all of us poets do, at some time or another. And we are always learning, too. A great poem, a deviation from your usual humourous poetry, but it shows that you are able to write serious stuff, too. I like this one. Love, Fran the Fan xx