Sky Is Falling Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Sky Is Falling

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Sky seems to be flooded and falling
With distress signals and calling
Aimlessly roam as foreign objects
Slowly loosing their heights and become reject

We are large family and galaxy of stars,
Look so close but miles far
Never falling but staying close
Always smiling and ready to pose

We have remained as closely guarded
Many praises and nicely worded
Thousands and thousands still unknown
Few of them have been hardly known

We are distinct and never collide
Some of us may drift and slightly slide
Leave high rays with friction of seconds
Does not harm earth even for moments

What these foreign elements search here?
Knowing not what and go to where?
Loosing heights and blinding path
Always hazards for sky and earth

Debris may fall as sky waste
Danger imminent and not rest
Consequences rare but always looming
Back to earth as homeward coming

Nothing can serve as good purpose
How can artificial suggest ideal propose?
Failed to recognize universe as such
What more is needed to know very much

Almighty around but no one knows
With slight pain eyes are raised with frown brows
Sky may look as if falling
It may remain and always calling

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Argum Sheth 14 August 2009

all useless objects are descending on earth....10

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Durga Sethani 14 August 2009

some debries are entries theatmosphere....10

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Rupa Shah 13 August 2009

many objects fall regularly....10

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Christina Phan 12 August 2009

Great idea to write about, its truth sky is falling 10++

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Jayant Manik 11 August 2009

sky is full of aimless objects....10

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Malaya Roses 31 May 2010

this is very clear that your poem based on what is the essence of human and world. you manage to bring it into words which understandable and deeper meaning for people who can read beyond sentence.

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Ashley Paul 24 October 2009

We have remained as closely guarded Many praises and nicely worded

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Severina Dsouza 17 October 2009

We are large family and galaxy of stars, Look so close but miles far

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Sadia Hussain 14 October 2009

We are distinct and never collide Some of us may drift and slightly slide Leave high rays with friction of seconds Does not harm earth even for moments

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Chaul Vania 15 August 2009

sjy is full of unuseful objects....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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