Karen GonzalezVidela


Sky Of Daisies - Poem by Karen GonzalezVidela

I stare above this six foot ground
and see live daisies spring to life.
How much I have missed that sky,
with its welcoming blue,
arising me in the mornings,
wrapping me tight at nights.
I have missed its breeze in the cool dawn
beautiful even on a cloudy afternoon.
But please don't get me wrong,
as I have always looked from the ground,
but how I have loved that sky
that never saw me as lower than itself.
And I stared up today
looking for a patch of blue,
but found myself disappointed
when daisies instead covered my heart.
They wrapped around my arms,
and contrasted with what I once saw
as a compassionate ghost sent for me alone.
I looked for my dear patch of sky
but none of its color remained with me.
As under as I could ever get,
I looked under my feet for these daisies' roots,
but froze when there were none below.
That sky I had missed for so long
lay underneath terrifying daisies
that had non the least sprung from myself.

Topic(s) of this poem: disappointment, discovery, regret


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Hey everyone! It's been a while since I don't write. I want to thank all of you who kept reading my poems! You inspired me to keep writing :)

Comments about Sky Of Daisies by Karen GonzalezVidela

  • Terry Craddock (9/22/2015 5:35:00 AM)


    No Thank You, I saved this onto my favourites list. :) (Report) Reply

    (9/22/2015 3:23:00 PM)

    :)

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  • Terry Craddock (9/20/2015 5:15:00 PM)


    Wow this poem is full of so many emotive images, contrasts, twists and turns, added to my favourites list 10+ (Report) Reply

    (9/20/2015 5:20:00 PM)

    Thank you!

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 20, 2015



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