Monday, August 24, 2015

Slow Poison Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why are you giving me slow poison?
My friends! Why are you acting as a foe?
Kill me at once if you can.
I am dying in stages.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 August 2015

Why did you develop a deadly civilization? It’s increasing pollution. It’s a slow poison for me! ......So nicely envisioned. A great write really......10

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Bisma Mirza 24 August 2015

Once again great one........... the best! ! ! 10 on 10

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 24 August 2015

beautiful....reflecting your deep concern for the mother earth. Lovely

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Kelly Kurt 24 August 2015

Our fathers and theirs before them started this insanity. Our children are merely following suit. We must teach them better in any way we can; like your excellent poem. Peace

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 24 August 2015

beautiful...reflecting your deep concern for the mother earth...lovely

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