David Keig

Rookie - 13 Points (1951 / UK)

Slow Seduction Silent Night - Poem by David Keig

Slow seduction silent night
Barely breathing burning bright
Closer closer touch feel hold
Power passion burnished gold
Softly softy warm within
He she it we you her him
Barely breathing burning bright
Slow seduction silent night.


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  • (12/5/2006 4:42:00 AM)


    This I can relate to, it is perhaps who or what your poetic pretences allows you to reveal. I am amazed (without having read more than a dozen or so of your posts) that no-one other than Herbert Nehrlich & I see it! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/17/2004 4:46:00 AM)


    The barely breathing must be your secret, I always need extra Oxygen. Poem is very likeable.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 16, 2004

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 16, 2004


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