Slumber Poem by Roshana Phillips

Slumber

Rating: 4.7


SHE WAS DEEP ASLEEP
DREAMING OF ALL THE THINGS SHE WISH SHE HAD
NEVER YET TRIED
ONLY MADE THEM ALIVE IN HEAR DREAMS
BUT WHEN SHE WOKE UP SUCCESS WAS GONE
SINCE SHE SLEPT TOO LONG.
AND NEVER ONE DAY MADE HER DREAMS A REALITY

Saturday, March 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 07 January 2020

An exceptional poem, dear Ma’am Roshana...10+++😍

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Roshana Phillips 01 April 2019

Thank-you Bryony Sheldon and Ratnakar Mandlik

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Bryony Sheldon 30 March 2019

Is it bad that I can relate to this? Great poem- 10!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 March 2019

After all, dreams are dreams and lot of efforts and hard work are necessary for transforming them into reality. Only deep sleep may not help. A meaningful verse. Thanks for sharing.

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Roshana Phillips

Roshana Phillips

Guyana, Georgetown
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