Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 400,089 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Small Creature - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Small creature

I feel so much excited
When received much awaited
Applause and response
That brought me in tears

It made me to feel
More as normal and humble
Even though I have more to struggle
To make in road with the hearts of the people

I wish to be part
In their each beat
To raise the level of standard
With simple and best words

I may try to prove
To be true
To the cause of literature
Even though I may be called small creature



Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal(8/27/2015 3: 00: 00 AM)
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Comments about Small Creature by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2015 8:09:00 PM)


    Hasmukhbhai, who calls you a small creature? Your certainly great with a regular contribution of verses.



    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    29 Aug,2015
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  • Ramesh T A (8/29/2015 3:26:00 AM)


    Each one has some talent sure. Your skill in writing your style of poetry belongs only to you! (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (8/29/2015 3:24:00 AM)


    Congrats..........Well deserved honor.
    Please review some of my poems, if u find time, Thanks in advance.
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  • Gajanan Mishra (8/29/2015 3:23:00 AM)


    very fine remark sir, namaskar.. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2015 3:15:00 AM)


    Small creature

    I feel so much excited
    When received much awaited
    Applause and response
    That brought me in tears
    (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2015 3:14:00 AM)


    Small creature

    I feel so much excited
    When received much awaited
    Applause and response
    That brought me in tears
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 29, 2015



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