You considered me the smile that brightens your face when you see a ray of light,
But I became a tear that falls off your eye making your heart heavy.
You tried retaining me in your eye,
But we knew less that I am meant to fall off you.
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A lovely poem quite insightful! My favorite lines: You tried retaining me in your eye, But we knew less that I am meant to fall off you...Thanks for sharing! You may like to read my poem 'Ode to My Conscience'!
A good start with a nice poem, Poorvi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
An insightful rendition of words from the heart. Thanks for sharing Poorvi.
Quite a beautiful song of the heart, crafted so beautifully. Loved almost every line of the poem. Please keep writing. I would love to share some of my poems with you too. Thanks dear Poorvi for sharing such a nicely crafted poem.