Sunday, January 21, 2018

Smile And Tears Comments

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You considered me the smile that brightens your face when you see a ray of light,
But I became a tear that falls off your eye making your heart heavy.
You tried retaining me in your eye,
But we knew less that I am meant to fall off you.
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Poorvi Shetty
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 March 2018

Quite a beautiful song of the heart, crafted so beautifully. Loved almost every line of the poem. Please keep writing. I would love to share some of my poems with you too. Thanks dear Poorvi for sharing such a nicely crafted poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 January 2018

A lovely poem quite insightful! My favorite lines: You tried retaining me in your eye, But we knew less that I am meant to fall off you...Thanks for sharing! You may like to read my poem 'Ode to My Conscience'!

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Poorvi Shetty 22 January 2018

This is for my love with deep regrets on my mistake

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Poorvi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Poorvi Shetty 22 January 2018

Thank you. I will read your poem and share my thoughts.

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Chinedu Dike 21 January 2018

An insightful rendition of words from the heart. Thanks for sharing Poorvi.

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Poorvi Shetty 22 January 2018

Thank you for complimenting my first attempt.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 January 2018

Poorvi, such a lovely writeπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Poorvi Shetty 22 January 2018

Thank you much πŸ˜ƒ

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