Friday, August 18, 2017

Smoking With My Dead Father Comments

Rating: 4.8

Standing under the street lamp
on the corner of Past and Future street
my father stood smiling, and smoking.
He always smiled.
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Smoky Hoss
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Kim Barney 14 April 2020

Smoky, this is a wonderful poem. I am giving it a ten (though I very seldom bother giving any points to poems) . I am also adding it to my favorite poem list.

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 August 2017

Write comment. Imagination, Smoky. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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The Crow 18 August 2017

That was really good Smoky. I would love to smoke and joke with my old man when he was young. Im into rhyme but that is good stuff.

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Lawerence Mize 18 August 2017

At least in our dreams we can share precious moments with our departed loved ones. You must miss your Dad a lot. to be dreaming about him Smoky. Great poem.

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Smoky Hoss 25 August 2017

Thanks Lawerence; and yes I sure do.

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