aung si myanmar

Snow - Poem by aung si myanmar

Snows! Snows!
Far from me.
Snows! Snows!
Around me.
Now...she, 'A Snow'
Deep in my soul.

Like a thorn in the shoe
That snow makes me fool
By giving dreams poisonous
Beset with long kisses.

Highest degree
More than to be crazy
Be looked into and asked about
With a hopeful doubt.
Sure, it is!
New corner within heart,
Love! ! !

How should I do?
Not ready for heartbeat yet.
Eagerly gaze her face.
Immediately my pride damage.
Coax my heart, and
Keep it in the dark.

Who knows? Who sees?
She's in breathing breeze.
Dare to feel sorrowful.
Would be truthful.
Let me fly to my goal
With missing smiles for evermore.
Snow! Snow! ! !

Comments about Snow by aung si myanmar

  • (8/24/2012 2:19:00 AM)

    We can not help what our own emotions create for us heck and we do not even know in the very begining as everything ever so slowly do change brother, love is hard and love does bring sorrow but it isn't good to hold within your feelings the poison of love comes and go it's just a matter of finding a sweet poison one that is right for you your poems bring out the hardships and trig of love and the emotions in this poem in some aspects remind me some of my own, this poem is a bit hard to understand but great at the same time (Report) Reply

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  • (8/13/2012 2:59:00 AM)

    It's wonderful but it's bringing me down. That's threw your future away what you want. Don’t be wearing up the dream again. Keep on living the real life and forget about it. (Report) Reply

  • Eindaray Kyaw (8/8/2012 10:30:00 PM)

    Hi, bro! I think you wrote this poem by wearing your heart on your sleeve.The more you feel, the sharper and deeper your poems.This is just my opinion, might be right or not because sometimes, a big poet can compose a fact or case even though they haven't had it really. You can take my words that i will forever be your greatest fan. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 8, 2012

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