May I Know? Poem by aung si myanmar

May I Know?

Rating: 4.8


Every night..., difficult to fall asleep
Owing to 'she' in heart deep.
Fancy murmurs about romantic stream.
May I know that is dream?

Every day..., I'm ably captivated
Owing to her poetry gifted.
Desire feels delight free.
May I know that is thrill?

Every moment..., I unforgettably see and here
Though she is not in eyes and ears.
Unconscious mind is tenderly tempted.
May I know that is attachment?

'she' I adore...is my life.
It's like a bond black and white.
Secret soul yearns for her touch.
May I know that is love?
May I know that is love?

May I know...?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philo Yan 13 September 2012

The stirrings of love can be confusing. Doubts creep in, questioning, Your poem reflects young uncertain, Yet excitement is certain.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 13 September 2012

For sure this is a love. this poem is so great and lovely. i have seen lots of romantic aspects in this work here. i embrace this work.

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Eindaray Kyaw 13 September 2012

really excellent poem..I can see through your poem How you adore your love! ! I enjoy this!

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Poetheart Morgan 14 September 2012

It's like a bond black and white. Secret soul yearns for her touch.UAU! I love that way you express your love. I see the bond in yours hearts, untie the knot.

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Sunny Rose 13 September 2012

Wow....a very romantic one i love it

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Gleb Zavlanov 13 August 2013

A very lovely write. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great work and thanks. Also, I invite you to read and comment.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 20 October 2012

Oh, nice whispers of the one in love. The heart will keep on murmuring its language until it gets its longing and desire. Nice way of giving language to bubbling emotions...

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Zero Ro 17 September 2012

Good poem...That's a crystal love...

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Asif Andalib 16 September 2012

Very nice poem. I especially like the lines It's like a bond black and white. Secret soul yearns for her touch. May I know that is love? Thanks for sharing

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 16 September 2012

Yes, here is the longing to know if what is felt is really love. This is one piece which many can identify with. Very good title that summarizes the central message.

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