Snow Song Poem by Smoky Hoss

Snow Song

Rating: 5.0


January, mourning.
No sun. No warmth.
Only snow, falling slowly, as if
piano keys
being pressed, softly.
A song forms into clouds
and descends
as gently tumbling music,
gracefully covering all
with a pause, a touch, a hush.
Trees dare not move,
lest they lose their blanket
of pure comfort.
Birds remain still,
make nary a noise, lest they
miss the whisper-chorus,
drifting in from beyond.
I hold my breath, and listen...
to all of creation paying rapt attention
to nature's musical,
a moving piano like concerto
of gently falling snow
in serene pianissimo.

Saturday, January 28, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: january,snow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 30 March 2023

Only snow, falling slowly, as if piano keys being pressed, softly.----------this is powerful writing, my friend---Glen has the right word---enchanting---weaving a spell with words---heady stuff! !

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Glen Kappy 07 March 2023

Smoky, I enjoyed this poem, the enchantment of it, once I got past the first two lines. Did you mean to write 'mourning' rather than morning? And the second line made me think more negative was coming—but no so. -Glen

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Smoky Hoss 08 March 2023

Glen, yes. Even in mourning there is some beautiful 'music' to be discovered.

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Susan Williams 01 February 2023

I fell under the spell of your Snow Song and summoned a million stars to shine on it and also faved it for my future delight

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Susan Williams 01 February 2023

you know, no one who doesn't know you would ever expect such lyrical elegant poetry by someone named Smoky Hoss! ! ! but we are fortunate to know you and are never surprised by your talent

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Smoky Hoss 04 February 2023

Why, thank you very kindly ma'am.

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