Snow White Poem by Sahar Sahar

Snow White



if there were warm shoes,
on slow winter road,
sparkly glimpse,
of snow could,
divert my steps,
engraved on my way,
upto white horizontal limits,
following upto,
white rabit hole,
white winter blanket,
covers all i can see,
still my thoughts,
are like pink lipstick,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rafique Farooqi 18 February 2010

i believe that you are nomore new to poetry, this piece is written and composed skillfully and in an innovative way...........10+++++++++

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Afzal Shauq 18 February 2010

if there were warm shoes, on slow winter road, sparkly glimpse, of snow could, divert my steps, engraved on my way, upto white horizontal limits, following upto, white rabit hole, white winter blanket, covers all i can see, still my thoughts, are like pink lipstick, wow..look at this lovely, soul touching and small but very rich poem..rich and romantic way written with meaningful style..the flow and the idea.. every thing is perfectly done in this poem...i really enjoyed and kept with me as you you sent..all my respects for you and say..you are really doing a good job..inspiring..10++++++++++++++++++

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Adam Reed 18 February 2010

nice =) i like the white rabbit hole one lol it made me smile

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