So Many (Incomplete) Poem by Asif Baloch

So Many (Incomplete)

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With nails I've scratched
the dreams of my eyes
but still they do come
don't know why

So many yearns
so many love
so many tears
didn't even fall

so many feelings
so many hopes
so many lies
to make this life float

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Anjali Sinha 30 May 2009

yeh so many feelings so many tears and so many aspirations so keep aloft that boat lovely write dear Asif we missed you all these days where were you? a tenner from meeeeeeee anjuuuuuuuu

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

you ve expressed yourself well indeed..what can I say, sometimes I feel like this too..in that sense it is very universal. cause emotions we express can be the feelings of anyone.. thanks for sharing..i specially liked this line 'With nails I've scratched the dreams of my eyes' nice 10++

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