Not Long Left

Rookie (17.05.1981 / The Molten Core)

So This Is What Has Become Of Us.(Part2) - Poem by Not Long Left

You had managed to drag yourself
to the foot of the stairs before you
had fallen into a crumpled sleep.
You had left behind your blood
which had travelled with you, like a snails
trail. For the first time in 13 years
I ignited a ciggarette inside this
bricked up world of yours. Knowing
you couldn't even smell that glorious
smoke let alone try and stop me.
I sat down on the bottom stair, and
lovingly stroked your blood splattered hair.


Comments about So This Is What Has Become Of Us.(Part2) by Not Long Left

  • (4/25/2006 7:51:00 AM)


    Some profoundly sick stuff in this series. (Report) Reply

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  • john tiong chunghoo (4/24/2006 11:23:00 AM)


    wow, vincent, this is eerire. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 24, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, April 24, 2006


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