Sobriety Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Sobriety

Rating: 5.0


unique the flowers to contradict
but bower to spread the fragrance and predict


sobriety the power to reveal the inner beauty
but long lasting effect is the pretty

like strings of lute stands alone
but quiver to give the same music to clone

love is the ocean of depth to find and bind
but souls are on the shores of sands never to mind


as pillars of temple stands apart to fathom
but shower to give the divinity of sanctum

coldness of heart in the winter sway
but to whisper the breeze in splinter way.

Wednesday, August 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sobriety
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
individuality and sobriety
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
B.m. Biswas 01 September 2016

sobriety the power to reveal the inner beauty but long lasting effect is the pretty....... every couple of lines is quotable...... very philosophical...images are high in quality....rhymes ate smooth and sweet sounding.... thanks.

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Unnikrishnan E S 31 August 2016

Hi Saraswathy, A beautiful poem revealing the importance of maintaining sobriety in one's life, expressed in matching imagery from nature, the bower with fragrance of life the nature offers. strings of lute stand alone, quiver to give the same music to clone.... love is the ocean of depth to find and bind but souls are on the shores of sands.... pillars of temple stands apart to fathom but shower to give the divinity of sanctum Loved reading the poem. Congrats for penning this one. Thank you for sharing.10++

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 01 September 2016

thanks a million, my gratitude for your great reviews, welcome sir.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 August 2016

To reveal the inner beauty! ! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks dear poet a search within!

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