Some April Day Poem by L MILTON HANKINS

Some April Day

Rating: 5.0


Another June day this second of October
Warm and breezy a single cloud hanging over
The summer he relished with pleasure is past
Despite its poignancy, he lingers long and fast
It will slink away tomorrow's fonder oblivion
Marking one more day before he will leave on
Life's journey into autumn's blessed stillness
Thinks he the more rather than the less
About the value of those days which lie ahead
Faith and hope wrestle with gloom and dread.

Some April day, perhaps, a fourth of June
He will still be here and singing another tune
He will have made it through another winter
Will come forth from the dark tomb he entered
That June day the second of October
Warm and breezy a single cloud hanging over.

Friday, October 2, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,future,hope
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is difficult to classify. It is composed with couplets, but it takes on the form of blank verse. Some might call it a corrupted sonnet. As so subject, it was inspired by an old man's (he is 97 years old)wish to die and constantly remarking that he has lived too long. Still he is especially healthy for a man his age. He said to me that he would commit suicide, but he is afraid of hell.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 03 October 2020

A well composed poem. Truly fascinating ...5 stars*****

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L MILTON HANKINS

L MILTON HANKINS

Hico Fayette Co West Virginia
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