Some Day Poem by Owen Smith

Some Day

Rating: 5.0


In the begining it was great
Our love was strong, it could never die
In the end, it was fate
Our love was gone, it was just a lie

You told me that it was you
None of this was my fault
I agree, it is true
In my wound your words are salt

You said you loved me as a friend
Not as a lover
This is good-bye, this is the end
Cause I caught you undercover

With a guy you said was a friend
Now I turn and walk away
This is finally gonna end
Mabey I'll love again some day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bella Hernandez 30 October 2011

lies will bring pain and death to an important part of a being- their HEART! nice poem.. hurt a little to read it ur friend Bella

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Gillian.E. Shaw 04 May 2009

Liked this - read the first two lines thought oh no... then the second two lines cleverly held me through to the end. There is skill here.

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Joseph Poewhit 04 May 2009

Deception in love hurts

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