Some Day Poem by Owen Smith

Some Day

Rating: 5.0


In the begining it was great
Our love was strong, it could never die
In the end, it was fate
Our love was gone, it was just a lie

You told me that it was you
None of this was my fault
I agree, it is true
In my wound your words are salt

You said you loved me as a friend
Not as a lover
This is good-bye, this is the end
Cause I caught you undercover

With a guy you said was a friend
Now I turn and walk away
This is finally gonna end
Mabey I'll love again some day.

Monday, May 4, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: friend
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bella Hernandez 30 October 2011

lies will bring pain and death to an important part of a being- their HEART! nice poem.. hurt a little to read it ur friend Bella

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Gillian.E. Shaw 04 May 2009

Liked this - read the first two lines thought oh no... then the second two lines cleverly held me through to the end. There is skill here.

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Joseph Poewhit 04 May 2009

Deception in love hurts

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