Radhika Karia

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Some Said... - Poem by Radhika Karia

Some said I had lost my mind,
The first time, on you, when I laid my eyes;
I was not sure if I was thrilled or petrified,
Cos you saw through me with no lies.

Some said I couldn’t have fallen in love,
With just one glance at you in the car;
It should have been something more than a look,
But who knew this relation would go so far.

Some said I was blushing without reason,
Whenever your name was said out loud;
Who knew I was crazily falling forever,
Into your love, without no doubt.

Some said I was rushing things up,
When the first time you kissed me back;
They didn’t know it all happened so sudden,
I think of that kiss, everyday, before I hit the sack.

Some said we were the perfect pair,
Whenever we were seen together;
Who knew time would fly by us,
We would be dying to meet each other.

Some said it couldn’t last for long,
When we finally parted our ways;
But they all forgot one thing that,
True love is something that always stays.

Comments about Some Said... by Radhika Karia

  • (8/2/2006 2:15:00 PM)

    increadible! loveee it! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (8/2/2006 1:41:00 PM)

    radhika...i liked the way your poem progressed...it had a nice feel to it...enjoyed it...love...nalini (Report) Reply

  • (8/2/2006 1:34:00 PM)

    I truly love this piece. Great style and full of emotion. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 2, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, August 20, 2010

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