Some Thoughts To Ponder: Ii Poem by indira babbellapati

Some Thoughts To Ponder: Ii

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when things connive
to unify
is there a force
that can tear them apart?

when things connive
to fall apart
is there a force
that can bind them?

21sep2009
15.03hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarvesh Kulkarni 22 September 2009

yes, definitely. when things unite, they have a potential energy in them, as a whole. and even the energy in their bonds. and while scattering, each scattered particle has kinetic energy in some amount. the only thing is that energy doesn't have a free will. else it would have inflicted its own destiny, i don't know. maybe...its all wonderful, ain't it?

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There is force of attraction which pulls bodies together and force of repulsion separates them when they come two close. A universal truth governing all celestial systems and those inside the atom.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 12 October 2009

you know I believe in Destiny and THINGS guided by him -an undefined Power- ! ! ! no thing, no one can face the Power of Destiny... yea that's all! ! ! 10 because you provoke my thoughts...

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Sandra Martyres 22 September 2009

A thought provoking piece indeed Indira...yet I believe that these forces can be influenced...

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Rakesh Bedi 22 September 2009

It seems there is a force much beyond human inellect which is capable of doing what your poem talks about.....may be that was in the poet's sub-conscious while composing this particular poem.....

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Maitreyee Joshi 22 September 2009

yes, the force that binds is love and no amount of hate can tear it apart and vice-versa.i think so!

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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