Someone Knocks At The Door - 04 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Someone Knocks At The Door - 04

Rating: 5.0


It was her
first date with Him.

She had to
take care, that
She was at
the zenith of her beauty,
She had her
most most beautiful robes on,
she checked
every bud,
every leaf,
every twig
in and around-
lest a yellow leaf,
or a worn petal
should spoil
the whole preparation
that moment.

There were only
a few minutes left
before she would be
there at the table
of her dream
fostered so long.
She had
no moment to stare,
She had
no moment to spare,
but only to care
her looks,
her exotic looks
as she meets her Lover.

Friday, March 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,seasons,spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prativa Rani 16 March 2018

She had no moment to spare, but only to care her looks, her exotic looks as she meets her Lover. A lovely write on Spring in so romantic manner. Thanks. 10+++++++++

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Prativa Rani 16 March 2018

She had no moment to spare, but only to care her looks, her exotic looks as she meets her Lover. A lovely write on Spring in so romantic manner. Thanks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 March 2018

Thank you Rajnish Sir for the great remarks and these warm words of encouragement. Thanks again.

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Rajnish Manga 03 March 2018

Delicate treatment given to the onset of spring season. Superb personification. Thanks, Subhas ji.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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