We are here not some where else,
Yet sometimes I feel I'm some where else.
Yes I know you are I'm some where else.
VERY GREEN, indeed! ! I'll grant you 'Poetic License' to use some where rather than somewhere. maybe it makes things more 'poetic'? ? Sometimes when i get 'in trouble at home' i'd rather be SOMEWHERE ELSE! ! ! LIKE AT the ICE CREAM SHOP! (every day) bri :) (cont.)
Some of us never know where we are (or even who we are) ! Thanks for posting, James.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
(cont.) p.s. the last line would sound more 'normal' if it had a period after are, but i don't know what the author is trying to convey to me. but certainly the poems i've read today from sir James are more clear than some i've read, and i KNOW they are shorter! !