Song Of Mourning Comments

Very thought provoking poem. I enjoyed reading it. Please keep writing and thanks for sharing.

a good insight poem, nicely penned..keep it up and continue write..nice reading ur poem

Well conceived and nicely penned. An insightful creation Josiah. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Thank you sir, I appreciate your comments

Fire has burned us. Let us hug our grief As the last breath is drawn.life is positive..... our poetic virtue is that we spread every where positive thoughts even in the midst of terrible sadness. .. because a poetic heart belongs to God. thank u dear poet.. tony

A good start with a nice poem, Josiah. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.