Song Of Spring 3 Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Song Of Spring 3

Rating: 5.0


O Spring, My Spring
You must be a little kind
To this lonely man and its poetic mind
He hath woven many a song in thy praise
With much wit and flair and not with any rage

O Spring, My Spring
You must stay here long
To soothe my heart and sing me a song
About riots of colors that spread across lands
About lovelorn birds in the sky chasing their friends

O Spring, My Spring
On your way to my land
Hath not you witness the fiery band
The wind along with sprouting leaves play
To lend pleasure to weary hearts through the day

O Spring, My Spring
Please don't hurry away
This time a little longer you must stay
Perching on the rooftop the cuckoo will sing
The finest of song of love playing music with its wings

O Spring, My Spring

Saturday, March 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 23 March 2017

your cuckoo is singing even now in m heart and in my brain. this is such a fine poem. come and remain with me to soothe my heart and sing me a lovely song. do not fly away. be with me. remain with me. very nice poem. thank you dear poet

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Sarah Mkhonza 22 March 2017

A lovely poem. I like the way you use imagery in this poem. I can see where you are as a poet. I like the rhyming lines at the end of each line and get the emotion of loving spring and how it brings hope to all of us about life getting into a new phase of growth. You merge the metaphor of the continuity of time well through the observations of the wind as a fiery band.

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 March 2017

Thanks for appreciation. It is the season that brings freshness to the nature and peace to to the mind as the earth begins to don a new cloth of green. Honored.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 March 2017

A lovely song of spring so beautifully rendered. Tiku ji, you have brought out the beauty and warmth of spring in this poem. All the four verses are superb! O Spring, My Spring Please don't hurry away This time a little longer you must stay Perching on the rooftop the cuckoo will sing The finest of song of love playing music with its wings i loved this spring poem. A full vote of 10

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 March 2017

Thanks very much for reading and wonderful comment. My regards.

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