Song Of The Lost Mermaid Poem by Sohini Pal

Song Of The Lost Mermaid

Rating: 4.6


All alone below the thundering sky,
I saw the heaven- dark and furious:
madened by the rage of destruction
It was vain to cry for help-
The voice came echoing back,
through the shrieking water
I saw the dazzling lightning
Raging over the water wrath;
And the crashing waves-
Oh! The raving mad waves
Wild and fierce
And I was there- unaided and helpless
Left to the mercy of
this furious God.

Slowly the tempestuous sea
and the vehement thunders
came to a stop
And once again the sea -
became calm and quite
But I was there-forsaken and forlorn
The lost mermaid
Too feeble to find my way back
On this vast expanse of tranquility

I heard a tune-
A long lost tune;
Was it the melody of heaven?
Where there was rage and fury
Just a while ago...
Or was it the repent of hell? A woe in the eternal fire,
Abode of evil spirits...
I heard the whine of the gentle breeze
Mourning with agony
I saw the pitiful sea
As pale as death

And then I had no fear
of being lost in this vast world
No misery no pain
I found the divine love -
in this anguished pain
Left to the clemency
of this woeful world
I began my song
with the mourning tune
The song of the Lost Mermaid...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 09 August 2009

lovely...the imagery is superb...you have fantastic maturity in your writing and thought...good wishes...10

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Sumanta Dasgupta 09 August 2009

Excelent Wish U every sucess in your life God bless U

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can i use this for my mermaid photography recently done. google me by my name on instagram

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Sohini. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Anand Madhukar 16 September 2009

Beautiful. I cant believe that you are just 13 odd years old. At this rate, you will surely win the Nobel for literature by the time you are a few years older.

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WoW great poet...so excellent writing..deserve more than 10 +++++++++++++

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Shirley Woods 09 August 2009

It is very lovely and thanks for that. My favourites do always tell a story although I find that hard to do myself. Good work and keep at it.

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