Songs Of Wives-01: Draupadi-05-The First Night With Him Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Songs Of Wives-01: Draupadi-05-The First Night With Him

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And within minutes

of your being with me

just changed everything,

Everything that a girl

possesses just within

to render one day

to the man of her dreams

to the king of her empire that

engulfed till date

the isles of her curves,

the mounts of her desires,

the lakes of her lust,

the oceans of her heart,

the skies of her dreams,

the valleys of her passion,

And the shores of her soul

Got the first surge of pleasure

Sweetening every cell of her being

The core of her existence.



A moment's touch of passion-

made all the differences

and turned her teen heart

ripen into a pair

of lovelorn feet

that baby-walked on

the cradle of conjugation

like a woman.

Songs Of Wives-01: Draupadi-05-The First Night With Him
Monday, November 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,longing,love and art,queen,riddle
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The five great wishes of Draupadi were granted, but it was not an easy life for the great queen to carry on with these boons granted to her. The life she went on with was at times bitterer than hell and at some other times an abode in heaven. Every moment she lived was more than the hardest test on the Earth.
But on Narada's advices, Draupadi decided to marry all the five brothers one by one, but to lead a conjugal life with each for a year subsequently. Although shocked to bear with the thought of not getting her for four years, each one agreed to this proposal.
The first to wed and conjugate with was Yudhisthira.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonali Parida 28 November 2017

Draupadi decided to marry all the five brothers one by one, but to lead a conjugal life with each for a year subsequently. Although shocked to bear with the thought of not getting her for four years, each one agreed to this proposal. The first to wed and conjugate with was Yudhisthira. A great creative effort Sir. A moment's touch of passion- made all the differences and turned her teen heart ripen into a pair of lovelorn feet Thanks. Sonali.

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Rajendra Rout 29 November 2017

Great poem shared.. I loved it 10++++++👌👌👌👌👌

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Rini Shibu 27 November 2017

Great poem about Draupadi and pandava Brothers..

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Prativa Rani 01 December 2020

nd the shores of her soul Got the first surge of pleasure Sweetening every cell of her being The core of her existence. Wow, how ecstatic.. So in some way too. Would love to read it again and again.

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Sonali Parida 02 December 2017

A great creative effort Sir. A moment's touch of passion- made all the differences and turned her teen heart ripen into a pair of lovelorn feet Thanks. Sonali.

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Sasmita Rani Nayak 29 November 2017

The first to wed and conjugate with was Yudhisthira. A great creative effort Sir. A moment's touch of passion- made all the differences and turned her teen heart ripen into a pair of lovelorn feet Thanks. 10++++ Sasmita

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Sasmita Rani Nayak 29 November 2017

The first to wed and conjugate with was Yudhisthira. A great creative effort Sir. A moment's touch of passion- made all the differences and turned her teen heart ripen into a pair of lovelorn feet Thanks.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 29 November 2017

and turned her teen heart ripen into a pair of lovelorn feet that baby-walked on the cradle of conjugation like a woman. Beautiful poem shared. 10++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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