Hearts of oak once pounding beating with joy
Waves of emotions of love sorrow mirth
Kind generosity did once employ
Now lying at rest their sunset the earth
In their youth they responded to the call
Forsaking everything for a damp trench
Going forward in no-man's land they fall
The smell of flowers exchanged for Death's stench
Once wounded they lay with bodies broken
Lying in mud their life but a trickle
Silent words that will never be spoken
Death walks slowly claims all with his suckle
Now glowing with shining peace where they lie
Unending glory in their clear blue sky
Powerfully captured the life time splendor and now the silent eternal sleep of the mighty dead! A great sonnet, David! Your sonnets always stand apart!
The glorious dead captured in fourteen powerful lines. Their deeds speak volumes and rays of hope emanate from where they lie. I am happy to see your sonnets again.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A glowing tribute to those who fell for their country, Your sonnet gives them eternal life. Thanks David