Sonnet: Dear Future Me Poem by Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet

Sonnet: Dear Future Me

Rating: 5.0


Dear future self, are you proud of me?
Did I set you up for sparkling success?
Or did I waste my youth in obscurity?
When you look back now, did I do my best?

Dear future me, do you like what you now see?
Did I take care of the temple in which you now dwell?
Or does your once silk skin sag from your bones like jelly?
When you look back now, would you say I invested well?

Dear future self, are you proud of what you have become?
Did I bring a beaming smile to your resplendent face?
Or are you now masking regret with bottles of tonic and rum?
When you peer back now, did I run my finest race?

So, when I am standing in front of a mirror in a decade or two
I will ask myself...are you proud of who's looking back at you?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 14 October 2020

An interesting imagination put across in the poem, loved it! To make the future self happy, we should do our best at the present moment. The poem gets the maximum rating from me,5*****.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 14 October 2020

Good poem. Whatever you find regret solves nothing. Jusy carry on living and learning

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