Sonnet17: Like A Tale Whereof Thou Dwell I Love Thee Poem by Pijush Biswas

Sonnet17: Like A Tale Whereof Thou Dwell I Love Thee

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Like a tale whereof thou dwell I love thee
Had I nought ever, nor cult yesterday too
Yet I unwrought today by self to be
For thou hast tale where birds woo
Primitive, - nor sorrow can touch skies
Of blues, nor begone well to narrow mind;
Just, to have a Heaven, tolls the breeze
I'm the less where pretty Loves bind?
Lo! like a skylark, far off, went my dun-
Pity has smell of smile, or keenness to see
Where pretty lovers meet their sun
Or haughtiness befalls attired by thee
Long Love! it can't hide asif it is dream
Though I have, thou fillest me at brim.



04/07/2016

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Sonnet17: Like A Tale Whereof Thou Dwell I Love Thee
Wednesday, April 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 07 April 2016

As if it is a dream! Thanks for sharing.

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Pijush Biswas 07 April 2016

thanks

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Kwai Chee Low 09 May 2016

My sentiments the same as Lalitha. I prefer poems of brevity, clear and simple where feelings and emotions are beautifully expressed. Vivid imagery and metaphors will give a poem added spice!

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Valsa George 19 April 2016

it is a beautiful write, but cannot be called a sonnet as sonnets have a conventionally prescribed norm!

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Here in the poem I see the wonderful imaginations and words rarely comes in daily use and I understand this is a poem surrendering oneself to the almighty in full humility and without self ego. The sentence most attracted by me is Haughtiness befalls attired thee . The expression of haughtiness in occasions of self confidence is praiseworthy and within the human character that I admire here.

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Pijush Biswas 08 April 2016

thank you Sir for criticism

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Sumit Ganguly 07 April 2016

Past all heat and storm, true long love reigns at heart.10

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Pijush Biswas 07 April 2016

thank you

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Raymond Farrell 07 April 2016

The imagery is excellent, it is well couched in Elizabethan style English or close thereto, there is nothing wrong with that in and of itself: but, it may not gain much currency today.

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Pijush Biswas 07 April 2016

thank you Sir for giving a judgement to my sonnet.

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Pijush Biswas

Pijush Biswas

Srirampur, Nadia, West Bengal, India
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