Thursday, May 10, 2012

Sonnett Vi Comments

Rating: 5.0

you are my dream, my one desire,
my moon in the night sky.
you are the spark that lights my fire,
you give me wings to fly.
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Juan Olivarez
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Joseph Anderson 17 May 2012

Hold on to her-a fine souce for inspiration.This flows so sweet and gentle-just great

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Hans Vr 11 May 2012

Fantastic sonnett. Superb content. I think your wife must be extremely happy to read such a beautiful piece of art dedicated to her. Excellent poem

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Heather Wilson 11 May 2012

Oh, that is so romantic, a lovely poem, such a feel good read.

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