Sorry Without Words Poem by Vicky Iliaens

Sorry Without Words

Rating: 5.0


when the sorry comes

Words that you said
and wherefrom you know you'd never say them again,
Like those tears that did not come before
and now flows like a tide of your cheeks
Because;

That person you care about so much
where you made such a fight about something so small,
not even worth it,
causing you to hurt him and hit him so hard

You're sorry
You fear you lost him now and feel too guilty to ask anything at all,

You show your repentance
but say not a word,
taste only the saltiness from your flooded cheeks and
Just think 'know for gods's sake that i love you! '

Baptized by your own tears,
by your feelings smaughtered
you pass him by
until he looks up and smiles at you

what you had no longer hoped for,
came still so quite and unexpectedly

Monday, September 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sorry day
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem as a teen to my very beloved... someone who died a week after reading this but it was sincere... it is possible I need to edit, please if you notice any spelling or grammarfaults please feel free to criticize, I can honestly really like honest critiques because they are simply to learn from, also If you d like to edit something on my poems itself, let me know what can be better! ty!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 04 September 2017

Such a great poem, Vicky... enjoyed reading... a perfect 10++++

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