Wanderer Poem by Vicky Iliaens
Wanderer
Wanderer
an unprecedented tour,
a trip out of nowhere,
into the unknown
an infinite journey,
I stray by my own thoughts
I wander from the path,
sometimes near,
sometimes far away
sometimes,
wanderer in own soul
so am I
away from own soul,
away from self,
Wanderer, that's me
wanderer in own soul
wanderer in this me
Wanderer I am
Wanderer anyone can be.
You have taken offence. Yes, the cited phrase – ‘I stray by own thoughts’ – indicates a very long experience of dos and don’ts, likes and dislikes etc; this realization very few have acquired, therefore I said- ‘It is a very mature thought indeed’ - appreciating its feel. Keep on writing and bring the best out of you. You and I seem to sail in the same boat, English is neither your first language nor mine yet we hang around exploring its diction and grammar.
'I stray by my own thoughts' - a very mature thought indeed.
well thank you for your very open opinion, I am happy to read that opinions do indeed not always seem to be the same, which is fine, perfect, yet I do regret you couln't quite taste it or perhaps even understand it? Not that I'd blame the reader because I should rewrite this one as it goes pretty deep but originally was written in Dutch, I'm worried my translations aren't done as it should
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 8:47:51 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A well articulated piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. Beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing vicky and do remain enriched.