Soul V/S Body Poem by Farah Ilyas

Soul V/S Body

Rating: 5.0


Lust of body, make thee blind.
Eyes of soul, Renovate to plants of Rappichines,
Nourishes by venom, Nurture for the sake of money ,
As, Buzzing bees flutter for honey,
Seek for cloak, forgotten the wearer,
True love, reliance & devotion for them is illicit bearer,
Body is just a item of clothing of soul,
Exertion whether superior or ghastly fall in that bowl.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.j. Wynn 21 June 2013

Another beautifully written gem.

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R.j. Wynn 21 June 2013

Another beautifully written gem.

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R.j. Wynn 21 June 2013

Another beautifully written gem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 June 2013

Lo pardaa uthh gayaa.....Truly wrote body a clothe to the soul very nice a smell of spiritualism

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Vineet Chhikara 18 June 2013

Soul.... actually I dont believe in this aatma and par aatma... but still i loved ur poems....

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2016

Lust is part of mankind; but, true love is superior! Thanks for sharing.

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Bayan Mirza 19 August 2014

Another wonderful poem i truly enjoyed, it is as emotional and vividly described as the other! The rhymes here are stronger as well, yet the balance is a bit off making the lines a bit shaky... Do excuse me for my brute honesty, I really mean no offense at all, and I hope you would kindly criticize my poems as well because we all have lots to learn from each other! Thank you! ! : D

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Heather Wilkins 26 September 2013

body is just a item of clothing of soul. a great thought.

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Sallam Yassin 28 June 2013

we all keen where the balance between body an. soul so the joy for us is beyond the wall/ well done Farah

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C. P. Sharma 28 June 2013

Body's beauty we all boast To soul's beauty I present a toast.

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Farah Ilyas

Farah Ilyas

Faisalabad, Pakistan
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