Sunday, June 17, 2012

Sound Of The Beating Heart! Comments

Rating: 5.0

we spend lifetimes searching
for the sound the leaf makes
turning from green to orange to red...
we spend our loving burning branches
...
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Eric Cockrell
COMMENTS
Dave Walker 18 June 2012

A beautiful poem, really put together well, really fantastic.

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Juan Olivarez 18 June 2012

Such poetic words ring so true. We are all those things mystically woven into the tapestry of life. Great, great poem.

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Neela Nath Das 18 June 2012

This poem has cinematic effect like fade in, fade out.Terrific word picture.I loved it Sir.

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Kasia Fedyk 17 June 2012

Eric, this is so Beautiful! reading this poem I find myself in the breath of Universal heart beating strong and in moments that take my breath away. This poem captures all of life so incredibly described spoken form your beating heart that all can hear. Thank you so much! Love and Light. Kasia

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