Sound Of Water Stream Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Sound Of Water Stream

Rating: 5.0


After rain stream is fully flowing,
Dancing in lands and hill top of hope,
Autumn stream is clear like silver grass,
Beauty is perceived in way of journey.

Stream is doing exercise in open gym,
Both physically and mentally in light,
Remaining fit and doing service is nice,
Stream has understood selfless service.

Water stream is flowing and glowing,
This is glowing into golden in a flow,
Sunrise has poured colourful rays again,
Power of awakening is felt well more.

Soft sound of water stream falls in ears,
Glorified name of God this chants sure,
Pure flow of spiritual journey enlightens,
Towards salvation this streams proceeds.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,22 September 2017. All rights reserved.

Friday, September 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,nature,perception,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pushpendra Patel 20 March 2019

Soft sound of water stream motivates mind. Benevolent soul rightly takes astral journey. God has given power to have this journey. He has given wisdom. This poem is very lovely and you are a nice poet.

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

We hear the great sound of water. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 March 2018

Towards Salvation! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 23 September 2017

I like how you handled this topic- - -in fact, the poem is an exposition of beauty, nature, spirituality. Stream is doing exercise in open gym, Both physically and mentally in light, Remaining fit and doing service is nice, Stream has understood selfless service.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I love the sense of humor in this stanza! ! ! Water stream is flowing and glowing, This is glowing into golden in a flow, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - You grabbed me there- -I love plating with words and playing with the sounds of words and playing with the rhymes of words I love this poem! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 September 2017

Write comment. A charming song of nature could be heard in this poem. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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