Sounds Poem by Sandra Osborne

Sounds

Rating: 3.1


The pat, pat, pat,
Of falling rain,
A radio's quiet reflection,
A small scared dog,
Wet, wanting to come in.

The sounds are woven
Within my life,
Like an old hemp rope,
With each strand frayed,
To sound my existence.

A chorus of strings,
Echoes from the past.
The gusting wind,
Of dual reality,
The rushing sounds,
Of love and fate.

Wednesday, December 22, 2004
Topic(s) of this poem: dog
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Astral Shepherd 04 January 2005

wonderful assonance, gentle word soundings of a rainy day. really, this should be read aloud for its full impact on the soul. Blessings and best wishes, ~richard

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Herbert Nehrlich1 22 December 2004

This is a 10 and it is pleasing to the ear, too. H

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Allan James Saywell 22 December 2004

A nice quiet poem concerned with sound, very well done sandra short poems can say more then long poems, with more power Regards AJS

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