Sour Grapes? Poem by Vincent LeVine

Sour Grapes?

Rating: 5.0


There once lived some grapes who hadn't much ambition
except to survive by the heat of a fire

then came the day when one grape was sick of the fire
made a decision, and left on a journey

all the other grapes remained by the fire
expecting he'd return once again for its heat

months had gone by and still they sat by the fire
thinking the journey had led to no source...

ah, but then in walked a raisin with a voice so familiar
that they knew that his journey had been successful at last

he sat by the fire and spoke of the sunlight
though no ones attention seemed eager enough

he wondered if they wouldn't rather hear stories of terror
and how he returned to sit by the fire?

he passed out his gifts he got in the sunlight
and for a while they seemed to enjoy their companion...

but when the raisin stood up to leave for the sunlight
not one grape moved from the fire to wish him farewell

and so he left for the last time, to find a home in the sunlight
to live amongst raisins rather than the grapes he thought he knew best.

Sour Grapes?
Friday, July 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: moving on
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It happens all the time...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 26 July 2018

Imaginative, humourous, with a sad kernel of truth hidden in the poem. Very well-written. Deserves to be rated!

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 July 2018

but when the raisin stood up to leave for the sunlight not one grape moved from the fire to wish him farewell and so he left for the last time, to find a home in the sunlight to live amongst raisins rather than the grapes he thought he knew best..... very fine figurative way of presentation....... moving on. and it happens all the time.. very fine poem. you have literary talent dear poet. tony

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Irfanulla Shariff 13 July 2018

A very thought provoking work of great connotation! Well done! Thanks for sharing. Keep writing…

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Vincent LeVine

Vincent LeVine

Boston, Massachusetts
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