Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 400,620 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Spare Your Time - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Spare your precious time to read
You may be famous poet and likely to lead
It will be fine if you read others articles
Even though it may not be of high quality substances

It is easy to write and forget
Not to bother about others and to let
Yet it helps in long run
When time comes to be appreciated in turn

No one can function in isolation
It has direct bearing and relation
It must be met with reciprocal gesture
Else you may be excluded for very sure

It is unfortunate we disregard other articles
Don’t go into depth or try to catch pulse
Any good comment may be appreciated by everyone
But few words of criticism may be liked by none

It has remained general tendency to confine with only few
Other may post it as routinely to be read or even not to be viewed
This is unhealthy practice and one must come out of it at earliest
The poetry has been at dead end and will starve in future for best

Some of the articles are appreciated in its true perspective
They have drawn attention and remained purely subjective
It has educational angle with useful message and warning
It may prove decisive if something is done from beginning

None of the poems should go unread or without comments
It may have large implications with positive movement
The moon, stars and sky has remained ever since same
We ourselves have to be armed with new concept without any blame

Encourage new and emerging youngsters
They may not be standard composers
Yet they need our care and attention
Enough encouragement with full respect and mention


Comments about Spare Your Time by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2011 7:25:00 AM)


    Encourage new and emerging youngsters
    They may not be standard composers
    Yet they need our care and attention
    Enough encouragement with full respect and mention
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 14, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 14, 2011


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