Friday, September 6, 2019

Sparkles Comments

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I felt extremely sad and depressed,
As I could not win the race,
The great man came and encouraged me saying,
"Don't worry,
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Bri Edwards 06 September 2019

if only the man's words don't become 'false hope'! ! ! then you may be MORE sad! i Googled " tingles vs. sparkles" and found evidence that either would fit here, though my preference would be tingle. BUT " sparkle" and " spine" makes a nice alliteration! ! ok, bri :) some races are not as important as others.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 September 2019

A motivational piece of work dear friend! Short but expressive... Beautifully drafted...10

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Irfanulla Shariff 06 September 2019

Immediately I felt sparkles in my spine And I resolved to come back with flying colours. A great come back…Nicely illustrated!

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