Sparkly In Your Eyes Poem by Putri Misnia Shary Bahri

Sparkly In Your Eyes

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sparkly in your eyes light as an ocean
torques blue as the sea waves
apart throughout daylight till midday
love which unknown
feelings which can’t describe
hinder to the memoirs to the past
where we belong
felt the eternity felt the waves
breezy air on my shoulder
smell the seashells under
heart to heart to heart
holding hand which aren’t fall
walking around the sea bay sore
walking on our barefoot

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A delightful read. Good metaphor, well expressed! ; D

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Vinod Kumar 25 July 2010

Beautiful expression of the land scape of love, to create the right situation in desert, thanks for sharing 10+

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