Thursday, September 24, 2015

Special Comments

Rating: 5.0

A brilliant shinning skin,
A wonderful black complexion,
No brown or white spot on my skin,
Fit for the black beauty competition
...
Read full text

Teddy Wirunda
COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 07 February 2018

Brilliant piece of poetry embellished in beautiful rhyme. Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing Teddy and do remain enriched.

0 0 Reply
Curtis Johnson 25 September 2015

Some of our fellow humans simply do not know the meaning of beauty. Nevertheless, the scenes continue to roll along, making your dream not only possible, but probable.

0 0 Reply
Kinyua Karanja 25 September 2015

well coined, thanks for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Fabrizio Frosini 24 September 2015

typos: shining / rough - - ''Rejected for a scene. '' :) nicely expressed WELCOME!

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success