Spilt Milk Poem by Harvey Horst

Spilt Milk

Rating: 4.3


Dear, Raymond
When we were younger
I hit you over the head
with a milk jug.

I'm sorry about that.
But these things happen;
There is no helping it.
Yet still, I think about it.

How the milk leaped
out of the broken bottle
then dove down
onto the plank vinyl.

The way you fell after it.
So limp, I didn't know
how limp you'd become.
And I think about it constantly,

Your burgundy blood
swirling in the pure white pool.
Pushing its tide further and further out.
I can't help but think of it.

What a waste of milk!

Thursday, May 6, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: friends,violence,blood,milk,thinking,apology,brotherhood
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by a short story that I don't remember the name of.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Owen Potts 06 May 2021

yes

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Cowboy Ron Williams 06 May 2021

I couldn't help it. I had to chuckle at the last line. What a waste of milk indeed!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 May 2021

Beautiful recpitulation of the adolescence with deep realization of the past.. magnificently drafted!

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Pamela Lutwyche 06 May 2021

Good story, don't cry over spilt milk. Kids,

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Harvey Horst

Harvey Horst

St. Louis, Missouri
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