Spring Is Not For Ever Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Spring Is Not For Ever

Rating: 5.0


Spring's red comes after a long winter's blue,
With a message to all mankind: Let go,
Forget the past to forge ahead and grow,
To life when comes the life as if born new.
March Twenty First1, mercury's on the march,
The grey acquires when a fresh coat of green,
Green life when comes under a greater arch,
Buds when blossom, the garden's no more lean,
And radiates with rainbow's shades many,
Birds, bees begin to sing in symphony.

Yet, summer takes o'er soon, dull gets cool breeze,
Sun acquires harsh grimace and no more smiles,
Not forever is spring, though God's grace is,
And all green gets pale grey for miles and miles.
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1. Vernal Equinox
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Sonnets | 12.04.04 |

Friday, November 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: green,spring,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2018

Seasons change and new seasons come. Spring is king of all seasons. But spring lasts for only two months and goes away. In this season we gather many memories. We witness green life under greater arch. An interesting poem is very well penned.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 November 2018

Thank you Kumarmani, you are spot on.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 November 2018

A wonderful Sonnet with a great message! The last fabulous! Loved reading this message yielding beautiful poem!

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 November 2018

Feedback always inspires man to move forward, and knowledgeable feedback more so. PH i believe is not a platform to criticise, but encourage poets. I am with it, but still I feel creative comments do have a place in taking to the next level. Any way, insofar as I'm concerned, I'd always welcome such comments. So, you may feel free, if you've one.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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